“The Hospital Tent” By Douglas Tomlinson
There are so many bodies laying around,
The doctor is going to amputate there parts,
The doctor is getting ready to amputate this guys arm,
The man who is going to get amputated is scared and he has to bite on some wood
His arm is being cut off,
There is blood everywhere,
It’s horrifying to watch,
I am surprised that the man isn’t dead.
The smell is really gross,
Everywhere I go the smell gets worse and worse,
It seems like the smell is following me,
There is blood and guts all over the people and floor.\
There is blood all of the bread basket of this one guy,
He will not be fighting again,
Everywhere you look there is arms and legs around you,
There are so many bodies laying around,
The doctor is going to amputate there parts,
The doctor is getting ready to amputate this guys arm,
The man who is going to get amputated is scared and he has to bite on some wood
His arm is being cut off,
There is blood everywhere,
It’s horrifying to watch,
I am surprised that the man isn’t dead.
The smell is really gross,
Everywhere I go the smell gets worse and worse,
It seems like the smell is following me,
There is blood and guts all over the people and floor.\
There is blood all of the bread basket of this one guy,
He will not be fighting again,
Everywhere you look there is arms and legs around you,
Yuck!
ReplyDeleteA bit short, but very good.
27/30 points for this one.
Yes, thanks Mrs. Siegmund for grading 27/30 points.
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